Thursday, July 23, 2009

HOW A POEM LEADS TO MURDER














I hadn’t read the poem “My Brother Killing My Brother” in years—2004 to be exact. The Detroit poet said he had no idea it would apply to U.S. soldiers. I guess timing is everything when it comes to publishing.

I brought the poem inside a correctional facility, its true meaning hidden within the pages of a now defunct literary journal, a meaning soon to be stretched within the confines of three concertina-wired fences and neighboring gun towers.

“I know this poet’s brother!” the classroom tutor says, chuckles. He parks his wheelchair near my desk.

I have a confession to make: I’m not passionate enough about poetry, unless, of course, it’s confessional poets validating their words through extreme measures. Still, I listen.

The tutor tells me how the poet’s brother pummeled a man with a baseball bat, how the poet’s brother didn’t know his victim, how the cops discovered the poet’s brother sleeping in a field not too far from the car he’d left idling on the shoulder of the road, how that car idled until it ran out of gas. “James,” the tutor remarks, “blacked out. The cops woke him up. He hadn’t a clue about what he’d done.” More laughter.

Of course I have no way of substantiating any of this; I have the words of a prisoner confined to a wheelchair.

I study the words, I stop at the subtitle: (in a series of poems denouncing violence). I read about images of exposed brain: tofu in Merlot sauce, feta cheese & beet juice on a salad of sticky hair, white chips of shattered skull…

I’m mesmerized by the words, by the totality of it all. And I’m a bit shocked as well. I feel like a detective assessing the crime scene. Who is this Detroit poet in question? I read parts of the byline: Joseph Ferrari, business owner of Leadfoot Press. If I wanted to know more, I’d contact the poet. I’d start by asking, “Do you have a brother?” Not that I need to—the poem has done its job, the poem is that good.

21 comments:

the walking man said...

Jim first congratulations on your win...once again brother...it's your year!

Second..Joe Ferrari is a long time born and bread resident of Detroit. Lives on the near west side, married to another fine poet who goes by the nom de plume Diamond Dancer.

His poetry is extremely real and resonates with an assumption of reality that only the old school poets of the post MC5/ John Sinclair era are able to achieve. I would say as a guess his writing credits go back 20 years (give or take)

Joe, like all poets works a day job and has been instrumental in the support and launching of many of the new school crop of slam/competition poets over the past 5 years through his publishing venture.

He is authentic Detroit through and through and one of the few people here who does not subscribe to the "Fuck 'Em" attitude. Joe was instrumental in Helping Arika Foreman and I do our first anthology 4 years ago.

Personally I had never heard anything of this sort of circumstance being associated with Joe and we did travel in the same circles for a time and you do know how people love to talk...so I would call "Bullshit" on the man in the wheel chair.

Although the story in and of itself sounds authentic Detroit but for one thing, we here never forget who or why we kill and we never would simply pass out with the keys in a running car...even drunk or stoned we always know we got to get away.

Bebo said...

JR: I'm right behind WM in saying a great big hearty CONGRATS ont the win!!!!

I am now inspired to go look up Joe Ferrari's work - gruesome as it sounds.

Charles Gramlich said...

Must have been powerful to have evoked such a response in you.

Charles Gramlich said...

Oh, and major congrats. It was a great story.

JR's Thumbprints said...

TWM,
Although I haven't met Joe Ferrari, I do know of him and Diamond Dancer. It's a hell of a poem, and his byline alludes to something other than a poem for US soldiers. Plus the title, plus the subtitle. I'm not sure one way or the other. Originally I was going to post this on Motor City Burning Press, but decided against it. Also, I knew you would give more insight to it.

Charles, you're absolutely correct. I'm not convinced that the prisoner in the wheelchair was bullshitting me.

Bebo, Even more gruesome when presented this sidebar story. Keep writing, too, Bebo - your top five material in my book.

ivan said...

Off the wall here:

But congratulations.

Here is something I've sent out to my Quarks, card-carrying member of Island Grove Press here in the Toronto area.

Quarks,
I am thinking of running a series of vignettes... Er, whatever they are. If I met a Frenchman I'd know for sure he is a vignette--off the vine--but I guess that's the root: Interesting fragments, a sort of story tha could be jumping out of a photograph (of which I have plenty to go along with your vignettes.
Donnetta has already sent me one and I can certainly steal some of Josie's on her "Majority of Two". Maybe JR and The Walking man want to play.
Ivan
Cheers all,

Ivan
............

You got a vignette, JR? Actually, I've seen a lot of them on your blog.
Send us a vignette.
A vignette is a kind of sidebar. Oh-oh. Cell bar?...Ah well, maybe you can write something out of the box. Heh.

Cheers

Erik Donald France said...

Congratso, man~

The whole post is eerie and powerful, whether the brother story is true or fiction or misplaced identity. . .

Erik Donald France said...

Whether or not, that is . . .

Love the post title.

Mona said...

sometimes a few words speak volumes!

And sometimes to murder like you say...Life is stranger than fiction. I have seen some gory things happen just by hints taken from TV serials by common people and executing crimes based on them.

I can imagine what a load of tales you must have heard from those people in jails...

And some of those people are victims of circumstances ...only judged... without a heart...

Tessa said...

Ooof! I came zooming over here to give you my personal standing ovation, but got totally caught up in reading this post.....I must now go and find Joe Ferrari.

First, though, huge congratulations on winning the In Vino Veritas contest. Having read your entry quite early on in the proceedings, I found myself so mesmerized in the story that I came back to read it again and again! Quite brilliant. I’m in awe at your ability as a wordsmith. A very, very well deserved win, J.R.

Tessa said...

I mean.....mesmerized by. Yikes.

Lou said...

Hey, glad you won! You're story made me feel uneasy, maybe because of the kids(?).
But to evoke emotion like that is real talent.

jodi said...

JR-Kudos! Is that Harsen's Island in the background of your photo?

Anonymous said...

Hey that looks like a fishin picture but where's the Walleye?
I believe TWM. We here BS all day long in there. I just want to enjoy my Jenny day. Have a good one. MW :)

Anonymous said...

oops hear.. Just comin out of anethesia. Enjoy your Jenny day.
MW

Julie said...

I thought I commented. Must be losing it. Anyway...here's what I thought I said.

Congratulations, JR! Your win is a well deserved honor, because your story rocks. Excellent work.

As for the post, I'm always careful to not believe what people say about a poet or a poem. I don't even trust what so-called experts say in many cases. I don't know Joe Ferrari, but I love his work that I have read. He is real and very talented.

JR's Thumbprints said...

It could be mistaken identity. There is a JAMES VINCENT FERRARI doing a life sentence for first degree murder, a crime he committed on 10/05/1989.

JR's Thumbprints said...

His crime was committed in Wayne County.

the walking man said...

Could be Jim...if so his brother, Joe, hasn't that kind of being in him.

JR's Thumbprints said...

... and the poem stands on its own as excellent. I'll have to read more of his material. He does have a fairly new literary magazine called Third Wednesday (http://thirdwednesday.org/aboutus.php).

Anonymous said...

You can pick your friends but not your family.