Jim...That was great! Good smooth read of a well written short. Apparently the convict couldn't make it on the East or West side either eh? I've made it on both damn sides of town. I do so love how the thug lights brag about their wealth of toughness.
Jim, I really enjoyed that one! I especially liked putting "free" in front of the other terms. That was great. Lord God there is no telling what touched that candy! You have a great weekend. D
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Jim...That was great! Good smooth read of a well written short. Apparently the convict couldn't make it on the East or West side either eh? I've made it on both damn sides of town. I do so love how the thug lights brag about their wealth of toughness.
I sure hope you didn't eat that cuz you know those candies are wrapped and rewrapped before keistering...Enjoyed your read. MW :)
Yeah, I don't think I'd eaten the candy either.
Great read of the story, though. You've got a good voice for it.
Jim, I really enjoyed that one! I especially liked putting "free" in front of the other terms. That was great. Lord God there is no telling what touched that candy! You have a great weekend. D
Superb marriage of voice and words.
Very well done, Jim. I'll take a free square any day.
Powerful story - another insight into your world.
And you possess a wonderful reading voice.
Cool Jim. I a contest of words, that inmate is without ammo compared to you!
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